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Metre

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Introduction

Form

Two-syllable foot

Three-syllable foot

Mixed metre

Pauses

Metaplasm

     Addition of letters or syllables

     Subtraction of letters or syllables

 

 

Introduction

Metre is the term used to describe the rhythmic arrangement of the accented and unaccented syllables in verse, and so the foot (See Verse page) is also known as a metric foot.  The analysis of the composition of a verse is known as scanning or scansion.

 

However it is important to remember that metre is not a template or pattern to be followed slavishly by the writer in producing a piece, but rather a means of describing what has been written. It is easy to think the former because so much is written about the subject and it appears on the face of it to be so prescriptive.   The most important thing is to write what feels and sounds natural and comfortable to the writer.  Others may disagree and that is their right, but it is perfectly acceptable to mix feet lengths and metric forms as long as it sounds and reads (reasonably) naturally, and is of course done (reasonably) consistently.

 

The great Bard himself (in his iambic pentameters) regularly used accentless feet, and ended lines with an extra unaccented syllable making the last foot an amphibrach rather than an iamb, and sometimes known as feminine iambic pentameter (again see below).

 

It is also perfectly acceptable, in moderation, to vary the natural stress of a word to make it fit the accent pattern of a verse (See in particular spondee below).  Even the great poets did it on a regular basis.

 

If a reader criticises part of a poem because it does not ‘conform’ in some way, so long as it sounds OK be sure that if the depths of the theory of Prosody are delved into, an exception will be found which will justify that which is being criticised.  And that is precisely the point: use the rules of prosody to justify (if you feel you need to!) what you write, rather than as tram lines along which you run your poem.

 

Form

A metric foot can only have one accented syllable but may have either one or two unaccented syllables as well (but see Monosyllabic foot below).  The unaccented syllables may follow, precede or surround the accented one according to the metre of the verse.

 

The various forms are shown below.  An accented syllable is represented by the ‘¬’ symbol and the unaccented ones by a ‘-‘.  The feet are separated by a ‘/’ symbol.

 

Two-syllable foot

A foot of two unequal syllables with the accented one following the unaccented one is known as an iamb and the metre is said to be iambic.  This is the classic and commonest form of English poetry and is illustrated below:

 

Iamb                                 Iambic tetrameter

- ¬ / - ¬ / - ¬ / - ¬                I WANder'd LONEly AS a CLOUD

 

 

The only other way an unequal two-syllable foot can be arranged is with the accented syllable first.  This form is known as trochee and is said to be trochaic, coming from the Greek word trokhaios meaning ‘running’.  The word trochee is itself trochaic (TROchee) and is shown below:

 

Trochee                            Trochaic heptameter

¬ - / ¬ - / ¬ - / ¬ -                STATEly SPANish GALLeON | COMing FROM the ISTHmus

 

 

A two-syllable foot with both syllables accented is known as a spondee (from a French word for a ritual drink because the spondee form was much used in the music which accompanied the ceremony in which the drink was consumed) or is said to be spondaic.  It is almost impossible to construct verse in English poetry using spondee.  Where spondaic words occur, and there are many like ‘hobnob’ or ‘bike-shed’, then one syllable is inevitably de-accented to create either an iamb or a trochee.  (See also monosyllabic foot below)

 

Spondee

¬ ¬

 

 

Three-syllable foot

Putting the accented syllable first followed by the two unaccented ones creates great drama and is called dactyl or is said to be dactylic.  The origin of the word is the Greek word daktulos meaning finger, since fingers (but not thumbs!) generally have three joints with the long one first.  This is the same root as Pterodactyl which as everyone knows was a pre-historic flying reptile.  It is so called because its wing  (ptero) was supported on an elongated finger (dactyl). 

 

Dactyl                             Dactylic Tetrameter (last syllable truncated)

¬ - - / ¬ - - / ¬ - - / ¬ - -    HALF a league/ HALF a league / HALF a league/  ONwards

 

                                               

The commonest form of the three-syllable foot in English is anapaest or is said to be anapaestic and has the accented syllable following two unaccented ones.  The word anapaest comes from Greek via Latin meaning ‘opposite’ as it is the reverse of dactyl above.  This creates a wonderful galloping rhythm, which is perfect for pacy narrative or humour:

 

Anapaest                        Anapaestic tetrameter

- - ¬ / - - ¬ / - - ¬ / - - ¬    There’s a MAN/ with a GUN/ and he’s WAIT/ -ing for ME

 

 

Putting the unaccented syllables on either side of the accented one is the only other possibility with three syllables and is called amphibrach or said to be amphibrachic.  The word derives from the Greek amphi meaning both (as in amphibian - something that can go on both land and sea) and brakhus meaning short so that both ends of an amphibrach are short (with the long accent in the middle).  It is also much used in humour and is the standard metre of the much-loved limerick.

 

Amphibrach may also be described as

 

Amphibrach                      Amphibrachic trimeter

- ¬ - / - ¬ - / - ¬ -                There WAS a / young LADy / from BROOKlyn

 

 

Mixed metre

It is possible and perfectly correct to mix certain metric forms in a single verse.  An example of this is in amphibrach above, the form of which can also be achieved in an iamb plus an appropriate number of anapaests (plus a spare unaccented or feminine syllable) as below:

 

Amphibrach                       Amphibrachic trimeter

- ¬ - / - ¬ - / - ¬ -                 There WAS a / young LADy / from BROOKlyn

 

Iamb + 2 anapaests

- ¬ / - - ¬ / - - ¬ / -               There WAS / a young LAD- / y from BROOK- /lyn

 

 

Browning’s famous poem ‘How They Brought the Good News from Ghent to Aix’ uses a delicious mixture of 3 amphibrachs and 1 final iamb or 1 initial iamb and 3 anapaests:

 

3 amphibrachs and an iamb

I SPRANG to / the STIRrup, / and JORis, / and HE:
I GALLoped, / Dirck GALLoped, / we GALLoped / all THREE;

1 iamb and 3 anapaests

I SPRANG / to the STIR / rup, and JOR / is, and HE:
I GALL / oped, Dirck GALL / oped, we GALL / oped all THREE;

 

 

It doesn’t matter how it is described, the effect is the same, and this further illustrates the point that scansion describes rather than prescribes what is written.  It is impossible to imagine Browning sitting tapping out the beat to see what he can write so as to follow his metre.  It is absolutely easy to see him with this wonderful galloping rhythm beating in his head and the words flowing easily in response.  Then afterwards when he’s having his cup of tea, to review it and observe that he’d just written 3 amphibrachs and an iamb or possibly even 1 iamb and 3 anapaests!
 

All the forms above may be and often are mixed to create interesting and captivating verses.

 

 

Pauses

A caesura is a natural pause in a verse, often denoting the end of one sentence or idea and the start of the next.  In scansion it is shown as a | symbol.

 

While in general terms a foot comprises one accented syllable and one or two unaccented ones, it is possible to have just the accented one on its own.  This is known as a monosyllabic foot.  Where two accented words are needed side by side (see also spondee above), at least one of them is likely to be a monosyllabic foot and the situation is dealt with in reading by applying a pause in the place of the missing unaccented syllable to maintain the rhythm.

 

 

Metaplasm

Metaplasm is the changing of words or phrases by adding or subtracting letters or syllables so as to maintain rhythm or rhyme.  So long as it is not overdone or overly forced, it is perfectly acceptable.  There are various forms of metaplasm.

 

Addition of letters or syllables

Paragogue is the addition of a letter or syllable to the end of a word as in amongst instead of among.  (Compare apocope below).

 

Prothesis is the addition of a letter or syllable at the beginning of a word as in ‘a-hunting we will go’(Compare aphaeresis below).

 

Epenthesis is the addition of letters or syllables to the middle of a word.  (Compare syncope below).

 

Diastole is the artificial lengthening of a vowel or syllable beyond its normal length. (Compare systole below)

 

Polysyndeton is the use of many conjunctions between clauses to slow the rhythm, e.g. multiple repetition of, say, and. (Compare asyndeton below).

 

 

Subtraction of letters or syllables

Ecthlipsis is the general term for the omission of letters or syllables for the sake of poetical metre.

 

Aphaeresis is the omission of a syllable or letter at the beginning of a word as in ‘tis for it is(Compare prothesis above).

 

Apocope is the omission of a letter or syllable at the end of a word.  (Compare paragogue above).

 

Syncope is the omission of letters from the middle of a word as in ne’er for never. (Compare epenthesis above).

 

Synaeresis is the compacting of two syllables into one.

 

Systole is the shortening of a vowel or syllable from its normal length.  (Compare diastole above)

 

Synalepha occurs where one word ends in a vowel and the next word also starts with a vowel, and the two sounds are run (or elided) together to form one sound so as to maintain rhythm.  In metre it is shown as _ (underscore).

 

Asyndeton is the omission of a conjunction between clauses. (Compare polysyndeton above)

 

Brachylogia is a colloquial shortened form of speech that does not follow regular grammar rules as in Afternoon! instead of Good afternoon!.

 

Ellipsis (or eclipsis) is the omission of a syllable, word or short phrase easily understood in context.

 

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